Your Turn Title: Chilly Weather....and it will just get worse..
Thesis: As it gets colder outside, there should be more buses running to help keep the students and staff from getting ill.
I. Intro
II. Students (mainly freshman) have to walk long distances to their classes.
-causes them to become ill more often
1) show a fact on average how many people get sick in the winter
III.
-solution---more buses running so the students can take them to their classes instead of walking.
IV. Conclusion
-restate thesis
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