Structure is good to have in an essay. I make movies and if there is no structure the movie will suck to the extreme. Speaking of movies...I havent made one in awhile...maybe i should get on that.
how about a movie about jacobs messed up dream?? (have him tell you about it its all kinds of crazy)
I will collaborate with Aaron and Jacob and we shall make a movie of epic proportions.
yeah you have to have structure in your essays or whatever you are doing. structure helps the viewer follow what it is you are exactly trying to say. I think that this has been a good freewriting session. I should do this more often...
One point that I would like to make is that this blog doesnt represent good structure at all...I mean its all over the place. The point McArdle made about Collateral was pretty good, even though he freakin ruined the movie. I mean seriously why not just go around ruining the endings to all the good movies?
Here is an example: (SPOILER ALERT!)
McArdle:"Hey kid you ever seen The Sixth Sense?"
Young Boy: "No but I am going to watch it tomorrow I am really excited to see it I heard its really good!"
McArdle: "Yeah the main dude is dead the whole time and he doesnt find out until the end."
Young Boy: "....you are a jerk"
McArdle: (laughs) [Emperor Palpatine laugh]
P.S sorry if I ruined the movie for you guys, I'm just trying to make a point, oh the irony...
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you ruin the ending of a film to prove a point about people who ruin the endings of films... interesting
I said SPOILER ALERT before I spoiled the movie!!!!!
had you said that you were about to spoil a movie before you ruined it, I wouldn't have cared. You should of a least said you were about to ruin the movie. You should let your audience know you are about to spoil a movie instead of just surprising them like you did. I said I was about to spoil a movie
You didnt.
Big difference
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At the end of my blog I said "oh the irony", in regards to how ironic it was that I ruined The Sixth Sense by trying to prove my point.
P.S
Go Sox (Boston accent)
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